Zionerd's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Spartan III Commando]

it looks really good but i think some more shadows would make him look more massiv adn give him more depth.

Rennis5 responds:

too true, thank you :)

[Update]

i really like the idea and ur coat is veary well done good moving and everything BUT the person needs much more detph and a more 3 dimensional look.

linda-mota responds:

With 3 dimensional do you mean shading at the bottom?

[My First Hoshi no Kaabii]

It looks good but some shadows seem not to be right (those at his right foot), ur colouring is a bit shaky on some places, also he seem to walk in the air and not jumping or flying. But the backround looks really good with the sun and the colors. keep it going.

Troisnyx responds:

Thanks! I'll keep all this in mind in my next works. : )

[Death From Above]

I think its looks a bit to 2 dimensional especially at his clothing and the backround. The lighting on his glasses looks more like they're striped coloured glasses and not like its the light. but its close. Good in my opinion is the effect of the skull and his neck bonesthey look really good with that light. keep on practicing.

Delta-ForceZero19 responds:

I appreciate your critique. I am not so much of a person who works with color. If you look at my other work I only really do black and white drawings. I might come back to this at some point once my ability's improve when it comes to color. But thank you for your suggestions and i will see if i can apply them later on.

[Melty monster 2]

I really like that character BUT I've got a suggestion to make it a better drawing and give him some more 3 dimensional look. U should make the thick lines on the right and on the top into thin lines. so the lines look more like shadows and give him a 3 dimension.

chiro94 responds:

i normaly do that in my drawings but this one is ment to be a logo so i desided to make it this way :D

[Happy Hour: Part 7.]

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love your stuff but the street crossing scene did take way to long and just was the same but i really like that comic strip just keep on with ideas.

ToonHole responds:

Yeah, I wanted to release part 6 and 7 together, so maybe then it wouldn't have felt as long, but it's been tough cranking out 8 pages a week. I kinda got behind, but you're right. We're almost done here tho! The series is coming to an end!

[Lady with Blue]

good job

i think it looks great but she dosen't seem to hold the glass that's what you should correct but everything else looks fine she really have a expression .

IamKingler responds:

thanks for the critique, I'll take note of that :D

[only for you]

yeah alright

the body parts seems to be out of place and the hand is to small but nice colouring and stuff.

supersexybeast responds:

pfft i just realized that D: thanks for pointing that out!!! OTL

[Josh]

you should improve that

you should improve the eyes by giving them light effects and just make them more alive the hair should not look like those lines it should look like single hair coming out of the head and a neck would be good too. but its a good try just try it again with this things and it'll be pretty good. by the way i like the skin an the light effecs on it.

Cope2K responds:

Yeah this needs tons of improvement. Thanks for the review :)

[I'm Not a Monster]

the joker

I like it but you should have a look on hands and proportions but the expression of the joker I think is really well done keep it up

AmBearLynnUnknown responds:

Thanks. Usually on any other picture my hands are good, this one was tough because of the angle.